Wednesday, September 21, 2005

Falling

Falling,
Painfully,
Completely.
Can’t get up,
Can’t come back.
You offer your hand-
I shake my head.
You come to my rescue-
I refuse.
You try again-
I turn my back.
I keep falling
Pitch dark.
I’m scared.
I’d love some help
You offer some
I want to accept.
A shadow in-between
Lurking ahead of me
Won’t allow-
My pride.
Just a shadow- virtual, make believe.
I’m still falling.
You turn your back.
I fall away-
Never to come back.
My fault.

5 Comments:

At 2:58 PM, Blogger halloweenlover said...

Ok, the spam did make me laugh, but this poem is fantastic. I am so envious of anyone that can write poetry, I pretty much stink at it.

 
At 1:52 AM, Blogger Rambler said...

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At 8:04 AM, Blogger iamnasra said...

Its long time for me to pay u a visit.. Life carries so much with living..Loved your blog...

 
At 8:05 AM, Blogger iamnasra said...

No Im not a spam ...You paid me a visit long time ...hope u recall but I dont think so

 
At 10:33 PM, Blogger iamnasra said...

nice poem..Its been awhile I did not return your visit ...Hope you forgive me for that

 

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